проверьте ошибки очень надо!!прошууу:
In the picture I can see two girls. They are talking. The girl on the left looks older than girl on the right. Her hair is brown and down. Her coat is burgundy. She smiles. Her friend in a blue T-shirt. Second girl had bracelet in one hand. They are talking about person who want to visit them. Second girl of them know. I like this picture because they are happy.
Проверьте пожалуйста, а то я часто делаю глупые ошибки (

Исправленный вариант:

In the picture I can see two girls. They are talking. The girl on the left looks older than the girl on the right. She has brown hair, and her hair is loose. She is wearing a burgundy coat. She is smiling. Her friend is wearing a blue T-shirt. The second girl has a bracelet on one wrist. They are talking about a person who wants to visit them. The second girl knows this person. I like this picture because they look happy.

Главные ошибки: нужно писать the girl, а не просто girl; is wearing, если говорим об одежде на картинке; has, а не had, потому что описание идёт в настоящем времени; who wants, потому что person — единственное число.

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