9. Now write a paragraph on the topic of why your house or flat is important to you. Look at the outline you made in exercise 7. Follow the procedure below.
Step 1. Write the first draft following your outline.
Step 2. Give your draft to your classmate to get feedback on your writing. You may also ask two more classmates to read your draft and give you feedback. These are checklist questions that are used when giving feedback on a paragraph.

My home is very important to me because it is the place where I feel safe, comfortable, and relaxed. After a long day at school or work, I can return home and rest in a familiar environment. My house is also special because I share it with my family, and we spend time together there, talk about our day, eat meals, and celebrate important occasions. Many of my happiest memories are connected with my home. I also have my own space where I can study, listen to music, read, or simply be alone with my thoughts. For these reasons, my home is not just a building; it is a place full of love, peace, and meaningful memories.